Writing Portfolio
I discussed the need for many of the students this year to improve their spelling. I compared poor spelling to poor hygiene. You may be a good person with interesting ideas on the inside, but poor hygiene can be very hard to look past. Each student should keep in their notebook a list of words they misspell with correct spellings.
We continued our work on our 5 paragraph essays. First period completed rewriting their introductory paragraphs which include the following:
1) Hook
2) Background on the issue (a brief summary of the main arguments on both sides of the issue)
3) Thesis statement (Opinion because________, ________, and __________.)
We learned about pronoun antecedents. Pronouns are words that take the place of nouns. The noun which is replaced/referred to is called the antecedent. Pronouns must match their antecedents in number (singular or plural). For example, in this thesis statement, the pronoun "it" is singular but the antecedent "uniforms" is plural. Instead of "it" the writer should use "they":
American high schools should not adopt uniforms because it is expensive, uncomfortable, and students can't use their freedom of expression.
Please also note that in the foregoing thesis statement, the three listed reasons are not all in the same grammatical format. One way to avoid this problem is to insert the word "because" in front of each of the reasons. The problem and solution will quickly become apparent:
American high schools should not adopt uniforms because they are expensive, because uncomfortable, and because students can't use their freedom of expression.
Corrected: American high schools should not adopt uniforms because they are expensive, they are uncomfortable, and students can't use their freedom of expression.
Better: American high schools should not adopt uniforms because they are expensive, they are uncomfortable, and they limit freedom of expression.
Best: American high schools should not adopt uniforms because they are expensive, uncomfortable, and limit freedom of expression
Next, we worked on composing effective body paragraphs. Strong paragraph structure includes the following:
- Claim (AKA: the topic sentence)
- Supporting sentences (with concrete evidence)
- Concluding sentences
We began examining and critiquing sample body paragraphs taken from the students' 5 paragraph essays on uniforms. We will continue this work on Thursday.
Core
Bellwrite #6: Describe your relationship with your father. How does it compare with Reuven's?
We considered vocabulary from Chapter 2 of
The Chosen. The only word that was unfamiliar with a Jewish word "tefillin" (
explanation).
Next, we began reviewing sentence diagramming using sentences from
The Chosen. We reviewed diagramming patterns for action verbs with direct and indirect objects as well as state of being verbs with predicate nouns/adjectives. We also reviewed diagramming of modifiers such as adjectives, adverbs, articles, and prepositional phrases. If you need a review, this
webpage is helpful.
For history, we began our exploration of the Middle East Conflict. We started by considering the Arab-Israel conflict (the source of many of the conflicts in the Middle East) with this
video. We discussed the bias of the video and considered how Palestinians would describe the conflict differently. They might argue that Palestinians/Muslims had occupied the region for generations and that Western countries had no right to vote to give their ancestral lands over to create a new state of Israel. We discussed the claims of Jews and Muslims to descent through Abraham's offspring: Isaac and Ishmael and disagreements over which family lines were covenant lines. We also considered the grounds for Jewish, Christian, and Islamic claims to Jerusalem as a holy city. A student astutely pointed out that these disputes resembled the baseball game in
The Chosen.
Next, I gave the first part of a presentation on basic history and beliefs of Islam.
Students should prepare, over the course of this unit, to answer these questions:
1) What misconceptions do many Americans have about Muslims?
2) How does the Islamic world view America?
We watched a little
video that begins to reveal some of the misconceptions Americans have about Muslims.
Homework: Read and annotate Chapter 3 of
The Chosen. (Learn vocabulary as you go.)